Wednesday, May 4, 2011

Well my final write

well judging by everyone in our class, i got a bunch of different reactions to my final write.So here is my questions, should i change it? please comment on this and let me know what i should do.  If i change it, it will be more of a poem style about how americans and afghans are when it came to us killing osama and them for 9/11.  so just let me know about it. thanks yall
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  1. AnonymousMay 4, 2011 at 9:51 PM

    I like your Idea about the Americans and Afghans. I liked your final piece as an everyday type of writing because it was humorous and that's always awesome but I feel like a final piece should have more of you in it. :) Good luck.

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  2. JoeMay 5, 2011 at 6:55 PM

    i think you should keep it, im tired of listening to a bunch of poems/ stories that are depressing and im sure they will as well. this story would lighten the mood. if i remember correct your story had no cussing in it and it wasnt really vogure... keep it just improve on maybe detail or make it a full scene instead of just a quick talk and thats all.

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